Battlefield Poem by Miley Stephans

Battlefield

Rating: 5.0


Shouts of fear
and commanding tones
fill their ears,
nearing the dawn.
A lake of red shredded everywhere
so many dead
you will find there.

Once a calm field
now at it's end.
Now a battlefield when will it end?
Families across the sea,
hoping to see their dear
Will they ever see,
their lost ones I fear?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Elias Uddin 13 February 2014

Families across the sea, hoping to see their dear Will they ever see, their lost ones I fear? liked...........................!

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Joshua Fegley 27 February 2013

A lake of red shredded everywhere. That's so cool. I like it.

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Dave Walker 26 February 2013

A powerful poem, like it.

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