Be Careful With The Gun You Pull Poem by Sofia Kioroglou

Be Careful With The Gun You Pull

Rating: 5.0


Forgive yourself and each other
Spew hate and watch it slap you in the face
Be careful with the gun you pull
the finger on the trigger may be your own-
but the target might be yourself

© Sofia Kioroglou

Be Careful With The Gun You Pull
Tuesday, February 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: revenge
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem was originally published in the Nigerian Literary Magazine ' Pengician'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 July 2019

This is an outstanding poem that stands up to the test of time! ! ! Enjoyed reading it again just as much as the first tine I read it! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 25 May 2017

You give edge to succinct as well as bit of film noir..... I think this piece is highly empowered. No vwonder it has been published- -it certainly deserves to be! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++...

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Sofia Kioroglou 25 May 2017

Thanks for assigning such a high rating! It means a lot coming from such a charismatic wordsmith Be blessed!

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 March 2017

Brief and to the point poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Sofia Kioroglou 25 May 2017

Thanks, Jazib! Your words are so encouraging!

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Sofia Kioroglou 12 March 2017

You are kindly welcome. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Cheers!

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Raymond Farrell 21 February 2017

Very true indeed and the thought is well presented.

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Sofia Kioroglou 22 February 2017

Thanks Reymond! Your feedback is greatly appreciated. Have a great day!

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Robert Merrett 21 February 2017

A poem with a great truth. Thank you Sofia ++10

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Sofia Kioroglou 22 February 2017

Thanks a lot, Robert. It is one of my faves. It darts through the heart of the matter! Athenian hugs!

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