to much to give in
to hard to break down
people live to stay strong
give up to give frown
why fall to the bottom
watching others rise to the top
fight hard till the end
don't stop till you drop
a very good poem i give it a ten. it is a good thing you did post it on poem hunter, keep on writing.
wow i like it good job....come check out my poems and tell me your input...thx again Chris Jessica Elizondo
Hello poet some great tywists in this ppoem, thoughtful good read. Have you read my poem 'I Must Be Strong? ' Please take a look. Thanks, Loyd
hey chris u are so talented man and its a great idea to write abt this topic keep it up ;)
Hey there. This is kinda good. Im not sure if I like the fourth line but i like the message this poem sends. Keep up the good work. Keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hello Chris. A very good ehthusiastic poem. Thanks for sharing and be sure to check out my poems. Loyd