Beacause You Live Comments

Hi Gloria - Pleasure to read one of your poems. Lovely message and a lively poem - I score it a TEN. Line 7 The world is full of people with no joys - even in a beautiful and blessed country like Canada and a lovely City like Calgary - which I love. Lines 9,10,11 We can all have joy if we relate to each other. Because I am a Man I'm reading these lines to apply to me especially because of Lines 12 & 13 'Because you are living - You making me live too'. I love that idea - those of us who are poets and really really alive in other ways - reach out to each other through Poemhunters - and this experience makes us all more alive. I can relate to Lines 14 to 17. I love to impart Faith & Hope to others and Breath & Life and my prayer for you Gloria is that you will have Self Belief. When we reach out in Poetry and in Love - and when people reach out to me - There are more stars in the sky - Becasue you live Gloria - I Live and Breath. In the Poemhunter Family we are all there for each other. Ecxellent - Love in poetry - JOHN

i like it.... very bittter sweet. nice feeling to it.

It has lots of emotion and imagery, very creative. I like it!

that is a really great poem it really touches the heart

A lot of feeling really is amazing