Bear With A Little Poem by Rahman Henry

Bear With A Little

Rating: 5.0


Flaming leaves, ah tree!
Bear with, bear with a little
Heavy shower waits

Monday, November 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: patience,suffering,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wild Horse 23 November 2015

Bear with, bear with a little more.....

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Ari Alsio 23 November 2015

The bear, leaves and shower, after all, the message of a love triangle enough. I think that Haiku has too many syllables and I wonder, therefore, that the bear has been doubled, and even used as a filler word ah exceeds the number of bytes. This is simply because, at least in Finland hyphenation would go to the Haiku 7-10-6. The mind will be yes a great atmosphere and the image of such a jet which bears falling point down my neck.

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Golam Morshed Chandan 23 November 2015

A good suggestion, in deed, I agreed with great poet Ari Alsio; dear poet Henry, do you agree?

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Sanjib Purohit 23 November 2015

Bear with silently, the night is about to over.....

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Photon Roy 23 November 2015

... bear with little more/ heavy shower waits....

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Rahman Henry

Rahman Henry

Natore, Bangladesh.
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