Rahman Henry

Gold Star - 35,707 Points (14 January 1970 / Natore, Bangladesh.)

Bear With A Little - Poem by Rahman Henry

Flaming leaves, ah tree!
Bear with, bear with a little
Heavy shower waits

Topic(s) of this poem: patience, suffering, waiting

Form: Haiku


Comments about Bear With A Little by Rahman Henry

  • (11/23/2015 4:06:00 AM)


    Bear with, bear with a little more..... (Report) Reply

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  • Ari Alsio (11/23/2015 2:46:00 AM)


    The bear, leaves and shower, after all, the message of a love triangle enough. I think that Haiku has too many syllables and I wonder, therefore, that the bear has been doubled, and even used as a filler word ah exceeds the number of bytes. This is simply because, at least in Finland hyphenation would go to the Haiku 7-10-6. The mind will be yes a great atmosphere and the image of such a jet which bears falling point down my neck. (Report) Reply

    Golam Morshed Chandan Golam Morshed Chandan (11/23/2015 2:54:00 AM)

    A good suggestion, in deed, I agreed with great poet Ari Alsio; dear poet Henry, do you agree?

  • Sanjib Purohit (11/23/2015 2:36:00 AM)


    Bear with silently, the night is about to over..... (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    ... bear with little more/ heavy shower waits.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, November 23, 2015


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