Flaming leaves, ah tree!
Bear with, bear with a little
Heavy shower waits
The bear, leaves and shower, after all, the message of a love triangle enough. I think that Haiku has too many syllables and I wonder, therefore, that the bear has been doubled, and even used as a filler word ah exceeds the number of bytes. This is simply because, at least in Finland hyphenation would go to the Haiku 7-10-6. The mind will be yes a great atmosphere and the image of such a jet which bears falling point down my neck.
A good suggestion, in deed, I agreed with great poet Ari Alsio; dear poet Henry, do you agree?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Bear with, bear with a little more.....