Thursday, December 1, 2005

Beautiful Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun was shining bright
Everything seemed so right
It was a beautiful day
and I decided to enjoy it in every way
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Arti Honrao
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Arti Chopra 06 December 2006

I really enjoyed your poem....vivid imagery, well portrayed.....till the crashing end well done..... your namesake arti

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Sallie Howson 01 December 2005

i enjoyed the imagery in this poem..and the brutal end

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