Your poem is beautiful, My dear
but I'm watching everything.
See how is creased your poem:
You have bad seam in your verse.
It sticked staza out underneath the skirt.
You smeared the makeup in the title.
Your song is beautiful, my dear
like the beautiful unsuspecting woman.
But I'm watching everything
a bit in the poem
and a little in your dress.
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Lijepa Pjesma
Lijepa ti je pjesma, mila moja
al' ja namćor pa sve gledam:
Vidi kako ti je zarozana pjesma:
Pocijepan ti šav u stihu.
Vidi ti se strofa ispod suknje.
Razmazala ti se šminka u naslovu.
Lijepa ti pjesma, mila moja
ko najljepša nedosanjana žena.
Al' ja namćor pa sve gledam
malo pjesmu a malo tvoju haljinu.
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