Beautifully Unknown Poem by Beautifully Unknown

Beautifully Unknown

Rating: 3.5


Cloudy days are some of her favorite
The only thing missing is the rain to kiss her face
She walks thinking of everything and nothing at the same time
One of the worst feelings in the world
The one she posseses
She has so much on her mind
Yet no way to get it out
Her eyes aren't capable of shedding anymore tears
After all these years of hiding her pain
Trying to deny what she feels
So no one can look upon her in shame
All for what, Nothing thats what
Now she's here, somewhere she loves to be
A place that knows her inside and out
It can't begin to compare to the rest
It shares the beauty of the pain she feels
As the sky fills with remourse, she crys for you
Not in tears, but in the raindrops that kiss her face
Everytime the sky crys, it crys for her
The one who can't
They share this pain no one can describe
The pain is beautiful, yet it consumes her soul
Day in and day out
She can't think of anything else
It drives her crazy
The stars don't even shine where she is anymore
For they have no reason
The day is night and the night is day
When you hear the clouds rumble...
Her heart is breaking in your hands
And the sky will cry for her, yet again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vernon Eaker 22 January 2009

I first must say that I am not very knowledgeable as to the proper terms frequently used in poetry, and I am not sure what style this is, my guess would be free form, either way it is not the style I am accustomed to so I can not help with structure I can say that I understand it all to well, I can feel the emotion and the torment and the sense of shame expressed in your words. and to me that's poetry.very nice I give it a (7)

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 January 2009

Your name is appropriate for this piece. Beautifully Unknown should be its name as well. There is no clue about her. She is in pain. That is all I know. Beyond that, I can't tell you what I think. I have no information. GW62

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