Beauty @16...(Inspired By Akhtar Jawad Saheb Ji Of Pakistan) Poem by me poet yeps poet

Beauty @16...(Inspired By Akhtar Jawad Saheb Ji Of Pakistan)

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Such beauty in the lovely gal,
I'd love to meet her

Compare her with the moon
Love her despite my age
and love doesn't see the structure
nor does it always mean
lust or sex

The beauty of love in one's eyes
often lies....
and so mostly all men lie
as in lie
just to lie as in lay
so that later they can play
and let the girl then go astray

Love in man's eyes mostly lies
as lies
the moon so far is a virgin
till a woman is devoured so is she

but then as the ecstasy grows within
she totally becomes numb and succumbs

you all call it love
some sin
others lust

but the union of a woman
with a true and sincere lover
is only what we all say is love
let the moon peep in only to see
who is lovelier
She or she earthly @19

How can true love
without a beautiful moon
ever be

Saturday, October 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend,girl,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and life,lust,moon,sex
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
NOTES
Love is for ever a story
each one writes so differently
since ages gone
and ages hence
love shall a mystery remain

The moon alone a virgin remains

Poet poet IN me
is an extraordinary
ROMANTIC LUMINARY
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 27 October 2018

Wonderful 👌 Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

delete my superfluous message ur welcome aI m glad at least you read me thankeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee NRais u have the poetic ink utilize it

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Naila Rais 27 October 2018

It can't be correct..... B'coz ph isn't for under 18...... Sorry! Why r u having problem? ? Have I done anything wrong? ? ? ? Whatsoever, should I have to leave?

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

glad ur rading me just correct ur dob

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