Because... Poem by S.D. TIWARI

Because...



He has given brain to keep him in memory.
He has given two eyes to glimpse his glory.
He has given us the soul because we can feel him.
He has given two hands so that we do good deeds.
He has given two legs so we go to holly places.
He has given two ears to listen mantras of his praise.
He has given nose because the stink we may discard.
He has given tongue because his name we may chant.
He has given us heart so that we may love him.
I love my Lord because as his child, he loves me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 19 August 2013

I like the idea of the poem, it's just that you repeat He has given over and over. Too redundant. He has given a brain to keep him in memory, two eyes to give Him glory. etc. Keep writing, and combine thoughts to make more sense - consolidate more in other words. Thank you for sharing your poetry. RoseAnn

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