Rahul Singh Rana

Rookie - 42 Points (1st july,1990 / meerut)

Because I Am Drunk - Poem by Rahul Singh Rana

Drunk in the wine of youth,
Drunk in the self made troupe,
Drunk in what they not call as wine,
Drunk, despite,
But in no whine.
Drunk in the hour of need,
Drunk, to be,
Is what i need.
Drunk in the name of thee,
Drunk, your beauty,
My eyes see.
Drunk alone in the hour of joy,
Drunk, in no sorrow,
But not all joy.
Drunk, as to who i am?
Drunk, as never i am..
Drunk, again,
In the ocean of wine,
But this time,
Drunk, but no whine...!

Comments about Because I Am Drunk by Rahul Singh Rana

  • Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/15/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    Drunk in life, with all its strife...Drunk in prose, this does disclose.. Great poem Rahul... (Report) Reply

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  • (1/26/2011 3:58:00 AM)

    Lovely thought...... well written poem...... (Report) Reply

  • Tammi Celina Lyons (6/8/2010 10:08:00 AM)

    this was very interesting...i liked it...** (Report) Reply

  • Emma Adamyan (6/6/2010 3:47:00 AM)

    fine work. interesting penned. i`d say wise enough for ur age and sex. hope not a part of ur biography (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2010 2:33:00 PM)

    You covered a wide varity of what drunk can do to you. From the good, bad and ugly. The ups and down that come with it and the figure of speech. Loved it, Something to make you think. (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2010 11:20:00 AM)

    well worded...with a strong message emebeded in this poem (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 9:21:00 AM)

    perfectly written, you deserve 10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 11:12:00 AM)

    awesome i like it its very profound you are very gifted (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 11:10:00 AM)

    awesome i like it its so profound (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 6:18:00 AM)

    A finely penned poem, Captured delightfully!
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 8:56:00 PM)

    i like it! it is so expressive! ]
    perfect 10
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  • (5/6/2010 4:28:00 PM)

    very nice and thoughtful poem.
    it has a lot of depth.
    take care
    see some of my poems too.
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  • Ravi A (5/6/2010 12:41:00 PM)

    'Drunk you are really with the beauties of nature' - I saw such a comment. Figurative sense of the word 'drink' is possible but the word in the first place will only take a reader to certain commonplace thoughts and I need not explain what it is. All the aspects of life cannot be simply drunk in the figurative sense of it. Every word carries a prominent meaning with it and readers will only catch this aspect in the first place. This is something human psychology. So, my view is that let us avoid repetition of such words that can easily take the readers to a commonplace thought, to a familiar slice of life - of a wine shop or a liquor shop. We have to take the mass psychology into consideration when we are choosing our wods - thanks. The moment we post our poems, it is no longer private. We need not give people a chance to think about wine shop or liquor shop even if that may not be our intentions. I hope you got my point. (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 11:53:00 AM)

    Drunk you really are with the beauties of nature, whether they are beauty of eyes, beauty of youth, beauty of the person you love. All have got the power to make you drunk - so you don't whine, but win the readers with your nice poetic sense. I accept you as a drunk because you're charmed by the beauties, you're a worshiper of beauty.

    Good write, keep it up.

    Gautam Sen
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  • (5/6/2010 7:54:00 AM)

    Drunk, your beauty,
    My eyes see.
    Drunk alone in the hour of joy,
    Drunk, in no sorrow,
    But not all joy.....
    these lines wer making me to think more about u....?
    but great thinking
    god has gifted more on ur writing keep on going and growing...
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  • (5/6/2010 7:07:00 AM)

    drunk but no wine...

    love this part...

    you are welcome to share your comments on my poems
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/6/2010 7:02:00 AM)

    Drunk! ! !
    Drunk! ! !
    beautiful! ! !
    Are u drunk with the poety spirit of the Gods of poetry..! ! !
    Thank u for sharing.. write and write. u hve talent..
    invite u to send ur valuable comments on my poems
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  • (4/28/2010 7:44:00 AM)

    Unique and amazing... :))
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 27, 2010

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