An Odious Adieu Poem by Rahul Singh Rana

An Odious Adieu

Rating: 4.6


As people pass by,
My parts (logs) remain left behind.
Once born in soil,
Will return back as such.

Once was i blooming in grace,
Chirrupings once heard,
Often called the 'nature's song.'
Will they wonder
Why me is absent this day?
Affection shown by passers,
Will they wonder
Why me is absent this day?
Dwellings being made,
My hand (trunk) being the base.
Those first flights being taught.
Those promises being framed.

Me was contented,
In being a friend,
To both friend and foe.
May it be harsh or soft,
In all times i stood,
Stood tall,
Sometimes autumn teasing me,
Sometimes spring giving me a new life.

Everything is lost now,
Nobody left to wonder
Over my absence.
All my past,
Forgotten and 'forgiven',
By my creator.
Nothing left to lament over.
So,
Who am i to put this in rhyme?
You'll never wonder,
As me was never present,
Inside your heart.
And so,
too rhymless
Will sound this rhyme.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 March 2009

lovely and romantic! let's hear Beethoven's L'Adieu Piano Sonata when read this words! keep writing!

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~ Jon London ~ 21 March 2009

Nice touch my friend....loved the imagery as you painted this romantic scene....nicely penned and well painted

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Reshma Ramesh 21 March 2009

very well penned indeed

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Al Ramos 21 March 2009

Nicely written as if from the heart of the tree

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Amber Vasquez 23 March 2009

Vary well written. thanks for the good read.

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Noreen Carden 17 September 2013

Hello Rahul another wonderful poem i enjoyed reading it Very well written

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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 October 2009

Logs left behind tell this story nicely.

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Surya . 02 October 2009

a nice poem.well narated.thanx sharing surya

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Ency Bearis 05 May 2009

a significant poem...well written...nice piece...

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

very good and straightforward words! we have to take care love and nature in balance! keep writing!

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