Paul Sebastian

Become A Diamond - Poem by Paul Sebastian

Much more must I proffer:
To carve a decent future
I will reach there, for you
Become, a diamond beau
Cut into a precious diamond
Glitter beside Lady Moon

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Topic(s) of this poem: dream

Comments about Become A Diamond by Paul Sebastian

  • Luis Estable (7/3/2017 1:57:00 AM)

    Become a diamond is to broad a thought or metaphor. What does it mean to become a diomand here? Make more money? Have better luck? Turn wealthy? I do not know.

    Some of the organization of the phrases and words in this try do not accomplish the task of wriitng coherent poetry.

    Think about what you want this poem to be. What should be the main focus and then choose your diction carefully.

    Good luck with that!

    Luis a. Estable

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 3, 2017

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