Forgiveness Poems: 91 / 500

Love Intimacy

Rating: 4.6

One night, I knocked your door
You opened welcoming me
We had tea and some spaghetti
We talked, fact-finding, no more

We communicated at head-level
Cautious, afraid to get to heart level
The path we treaded was graveled
It was boring, yet our talk-traveled

Wooden heart doors stayed closed
Void of gut-level real communication
Defensively scrapping for information
Sharing was volunteered, not forced

Hours passed, topic after topic
Your hidden heart, wish I knew
To know you is to touch the real you
Whilst skirting, we were not affective

Let's share our likes and dislikes
Share our wants and needs
Wander into future dreams
Self-disclose our moods and vibes

Why not be unafraid, be real?
Is opening up, to share, a risk?
In knowing you, I begin to trust
Being real, you cannot be unreal

Trusting someone is a choice
To love someone is a choice
Gift of oneself is a choice
Happiness path is a choice

Love is intricately weaved
Through gentleness and kindness
Through patience and forgiveness
Unconditional love breeds

Love, endures weather of life
Love is to last life long
Love lives life beyond
Intimacy keeps love-life alive


4.12.2016

Love Intimacy
Saturday, December 3, 2016
Forgiveness Poems: 91 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: communication,love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A beautiful love poem Paul.Congratulations on being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Paul Sebastian 06 December 2016

Thank you Sir! We all have a part to play!

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Kim Barney 06 December 2016

Congratulations on poem of the day! Very nicely done, Paul!

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Paul Sebastian 06 December 2016

Thank you so much!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 December 2016

An intimate relationship viewed through a spiritually molded mind, without being a prey of sadistic feelings. Congrats for being the members PoD. X

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Paul Sebastian 07 December 2016

Love is giving..to love one gives completely. Trusting completely.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 06 December 2016

awesome insight into relationships and its reality, like to share my regards for giving the best work thanks sir

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Richard Wlodarski 06 December 2016

Wow! How beautifully you've illustrated this thing called relationships. The fear of risking, yet braving through and discovering the greatest gift of all...LOVE. Paul, congratulations on Poem Of The Day! Very Well Deserved!

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Simone Inez Harriman 06 December 2016

Congratulations for the well deserved poem of the day Paul. I guess fear prevents us from exposing our real feelings. Fear of our feelings not being reciprocal and that it may ruin a good friendship is right up there with not being able to open up to another person due to fear of being hurt or disappointed. An interesting write from start to finish. Thank you Paul.

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Linet Sabastian 06 December 2016

You thought well and you wrote well. Thank you for sharing with us.

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