Becoming Well Poem by Smoky Hoss

Becoming Well



I find more and more
That I need
Less and less
Of the things
I was told so long ago
That we're necessary
For living a life
Well -
More and more
Leads to a sickness
Without end,
And less to a whole
Wellness...
With one major exception,
Love.
With more and more love
We not only become well,
We become eternal.

Sunday, March 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 09 April 2019

hey, smoky! i wondered what you've been up to poetically speaking and was attracted to the title of this poem. —i've spent most of the last week close to home dealing with a doozy of a cold. i'm on the mend i think, but still have the annoying scratchy throat and cough, and i have yet to see if my energy's near normal... i agree with what you assert here 100%. hoping this finds you well in all ways, glen

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Smoky Hoss 11 May 2019

Thanks Glenn; I sincerely appreciate it! Life’s been a test and a struggle of late. One day at a time, trusting.... peace my friend...

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Lawerence Mize 18 March 2019

Love is what everyone needs. Good one Smoky.

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Lawerence Mize 18 March 2019

Love is the one thing we all need. Good one Smoky.

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