Before I Am No More! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by sreelekha premjit

Before I Am No More! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.8


I have seen you up close
over and again
many times over


I have felt you real close
over and again
many times over

I have heard you often
over and again
many times over

last time when you
helped me stand
after a sudden fall

and later when I
stood confused at the intersection
unable to choose

and then when I
was about to give up
u egged me on

I have truly felt you, seen you and heard you
I have tried you, tested you and acknowledged you
All I want now is to embrace you
(before i am no more! ! ! !)

Wednesday, January 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: spirit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely poem i like the way you brought so much feelings and thoughts into this poem.. You made it nice and strong but needs a bit of a foundation... Nice work krista

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User Deleted 30 January 2009

this is a passionate piece of work...well done!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 January 2009

I have truly felt you, seen you and heard you I have tried you, tested you and acknowledged you All I want now is to embrace you..................................oh what a beauty of love creeping over the entirety by silky shadow of breath, yet it croons by wish of embrace, wrought ingenious by wonderfu imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 January 2009

love blazes glory of grace and riffles the pages onto embrace, wonderful thought by the imagery, yet luscious flow on the rune of passion, eloquent, quite evocative too,10++++, thanks fotr sharing

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

fine poetry, , , real longing

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 January 2009

lovely poem...emotion brought out well

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