Before They Aren'T There Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Before They Aren'T There

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When you narrow your focus for wayside picks
can see a couple of sparrow prancing on bricks
they are still not gone out of town
the lady whitish her male red brown!

They are fast fading leaving no trace
love human home for building nest
but where are nooks for them warm space
a cool inlet for summer's rest!

But still they seek would go last length
with all their hearts gathered strength
to find an address can call their own
these cutest birds need kindness shown!

Their chirping weaves what magic spell
the pretty lady and her brownish male
let's spare for the couple one smallest nook
not leave them be fable in storybook!

Thursday, March 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Johnston 04 April 2014

Really it's hard to imagine that sparrows will ever go extinct. In the US it seems to me they are kind of the cockroaches of the bird family. There are so many of them. Here I do take delight in finches for example with their splash of color, like a flower in the shrubs, but sparrows? OK I know the Christian Bible says that God loves even them (they are so drab) , so maybe I need an attitude adjustment? Peace! : -)

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Lorraine Colon 28 March 2014

I love birds, so I cannot read your poem without saying how much I liked it. Today I saw a Red Tailed Hawk in my yard. But I worry when I see him - he attacks and eats other little birds. But they know the danger and hide in the trees. Great poem, Pradip.

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Valsa George 27 March 2014

If the sparrows turn down to mere pictures on story books, it is going to be an irreparable loss to posterity... How we used to delight over their sight.... Now in our place, it is almost becoming extinct! Let the pretty lady and her brownish male find a nook to cuddle together.....! Thanks for your comment on my 300th poem!

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