Before You Leave Poem by Missy Melita
Before You Leave
I always pray for you.
I always want to know deeper about you.
I always afraid about farewell.
I always hate everytime you say goodbye.
I always keep my dissapointment.
I always try to throw away every bad feelings.
I always learn to understand how busy you are.
I always smile though i want to cry.
I always proud about everything you’ve done.
I always fight for our friendship.
I always think about how do you do.
I always talk about you to people.
I always dream about your happiness.
I always desire to know what had happened to you.
I always hope you have a really great day.
I always believe that you will have a good life.
I always know your faith will save you.
I always wish that no one hurt you.
I always make myself sure that you still remember me.
I always happy everytime you message me.
I always sad everytime you get ill.
I always appreciate every chance we are together.
I always give everything that I can.
I always bet you are a good man.
I always build the best friend figure for you.
I always doubt that people will remember me.
I always want to spend my times with you.
I always emphasize your need.
I always try to fulfil what do you want from me.
Before you leave…
Let me tell you that,
I always love you.
for me, this is the best poem you've ever made.. brilliant idea, amazing words.. how romantic.. excellent work, you are absolutely TALENTED.. I wish a bright future career for you.. you are gifted, I know you can make it to the pro level
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4/22/2024 10:03:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
OK, there are some good lines in here but I feel you are trying to make the repetition to work so much some of your lines don't make sense. 'I always happy' is clumsy and awkward, and 'how do you do' probably could be re-worded. I am always happy sounds a lot better, but that doesn't go along with your repetition. Its what you want to accomplish with the poem.