Farewell To Elizabeth Poem by Missy Melita

Farewell To Elizabeth



It takes too hard for me
Just to make sure
That I have someone
Whom I could call a friend.

I thought friendship is just a story
A single scene that passed easily in my life
And it is not something that I need to remember.

But why I believe like it's true
When I met you year ago
Thing that would never come to pass me
Yet it really happened.

Elizabeth,
You're a friend, You're a sister.
You're the great one.
And I can't understand why
Your name crosses in my mind all the time
When I need someone to lean on.

I know there will be farewell
But why it comes so hurt
When I catch that time runs faster
Closer and all I want is to deny it.

You are no there in my sweet 17th's
And you're no there to see me baptized in Father's name
Moments and times I wish you are there
And indeed you're not
That's what farewell means to me.

Elizabeth,
This tears are my tears
That I shed for your life
The bright future in front of you
It's all yours.

Elizabeth,
My prayer walks with you
My hopes live with you
My heart will always be right here
This is a confession
Deep from my heart
That you are my friend forever.

One day..
Let the fate meet us back
Like it had made us met year ago
And you won't see my love for you
Has changed.

Elizabeth,
I love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 28 November 2008

Fred's absolutely right Missy, don't 'throw' words on the page, think about them, seriously. Best, Jerry

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Fred Babbin 16 November 2008

I can see that your thoughts are deeply felt, but you need to learn more about writing poetry.

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Keith Gaboury 06 November 2008

I'm confused by the first line. I tried reading it a couple times, but it doesn't sound right. And when the first line isn't working, the reader is a lot less likely to keep on reading.

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Gerry Tanamas 15 June 2008

the 'I Love You' ending makes this poem memorable and unique.. a little bit 'love letter' version.. the best part for me is the title.. very high class this poem is like a combination between ' An Angel' and 'Before You Leave' good job, as usual

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