C.J. Heck

Rookie - 258 Points (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

Beggar Man - Poem by C.J. Heck

You were a gentle soul,
with a stained red plaid shirt,
hat speckled with bird poop,
in saggy-baggy pants that stopped
just above two heelless shoes that were
see-through to feet with no socks.

So many mornings
I walked by your corner,
putting money in your cup
if only to borrow a smile
when I had none left of my own.
I always knew the one you gave
would be the one that found
those I had only misplaced for awhile.

Countless times we shared a lunch,
and so did many others,
hot soup from the deli across the street
or half a tuna sandwich from home,
you shared your wooden pallet
but not once a conversation,
and all the while, you never missed a beat
as you continued to pass out
that glorious smile to everyone
who sauntered by.

I wonder what happened in your life
to make you take up
residence on that corner,
to die cold and alone,
the smiles you apportioned
your only living legacy.

You will be missed by many,
even the shopkeepers who
so often shooed you away.
I hope you knew
what you meant to me
… and I didn’t even know your name.


Comments about Beggar Man by C.J. Heck

  • (11/1/2006 5:13:00 PM)

    Very explicit write about the forgotten individuals we see every day.I wrote one in similar vein about a guy called 'Joe' who lived in a park in the centre of Dublin.He was a gentleman.
    Regards Sid John x.
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  • (10/20/2006 6:11:00 AM)

    If you killed a beggar, you would just be like killing yourself. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/20/2006 6:00:00 AM)

    A Big hello to you too. What a nice suprise to see your name here hope all is well.
    As for the poem, it is grand, the reason being is you have used great description.
    In particular I very much liked the lines about the smiles..... and the opening lines that describe how he is dressed. The title also works well with the poem, as you
    describe at the end that you did not know his name it pulls the it alltogether and enables it to stand way above most poems of this type.

    once again nice to hear from you.

    best wishes

    Vincent
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 21, 2010


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