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New Zealand

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when I see a cold critic write
a comment stating a 'beginning
lacks substance to draw you in'

which draw me in hook line and sinker
then my friend I cannot agree because
that beginning drew me in mesmerized

fired imagination with flames of fire
my desire was inspired to write write write
thus again am I lost in an eternal night

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Terence George Craddock

Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Topic(s) of this poem: writing

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Inspired by a critic who posts no poems, commenting on the poem 'At The Door' by David Wagoner. Dedicated to the poet David Wagoner. Written in November 2014 on the 9.11.2014.

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