Behind Bars Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

Behind Bars

Rating: 5.0


SITTING ON THE COLD GROUND NOT HEARING A SOUND WANTING TO SCREAM WISHING THAT THIS WAS A DREAM THE ROOM IS FRIGHTENING HATRED BRIGHTENING SITTING IN DESPAIR YOU STOOD THERE IN YOUR HAND WAS A KNIFE YOU WERE ABOUT TO END MY LIFE BUT I STARTED TO PRAY YOU MOVED AWAY YOU STARTED SHAKING YOUR GRIP ON THE KNIFE BREAKING TRYING TO DEFEND YOU CAUSED YOUR OWN END I MAY HAVE SCARS, BUT YOU ARE BEHIND BARS

Friday, July 10, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,dream,may
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Goodness. This sounds frightening and you have certainly written this with strong emotion and words. Well done. 10 Karin Anderson

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Henry Brown 11 July 2009

Luzaan You have talent Go girl go 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 July 2009

woderful write by imagery and metaphysics yet it stops beackoning.....

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