Death Bed (Letter To The Mother) Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

Death Bed (Letter To The Mother)

Rating: 5.0


MOMMY I AM SICK
I REALLY DONT WANT TO LEAVE YOU
BUT PLEASE UNDERSTAND WHAT IM GOING THRU
MY WISH FOR YOU IS NEVER TO CRY
MOMMY DO IT FOR ME, ATLEAST TRY! !
I KNOW THAT I AM GOING TO DIE
AND TO HEAVEN I WILL FLY
WE KNEW THERE WOULD BE AN END
YOU CANT DEFEND AGAINST BRAIN CANCER
I DONT WANT TO LEAVE YOU BEHIND
BUT IF I DO PLEASE DONT MIND
IM IN HORRIBLE PAIN
AND ITS DRIVING ME INSANE
TELL DADDY I LOVE HIM
YOU ALWAYS SAID WORDS ARE BETTER THAN DOINGS
AT THIS MOMENT WORDS IS ALL I HAVE
SOON GOD WILL COME AND TAKE ME AWAY
THAT IS WHAT I WANT, ITS THE BEST FOR ME
ASK GOD TO COME
BECAUSE MY LIFE ON EARTH IS DONE
MOMMY I LOVE YOU ALL
JUST REMEMBER ME, YOUR EIGHT YEAR OLD SON
I WILL WAIT FOR YOU IN HEAVEN
AND THERE I WILL STAND STRONG AND TALL

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

oh so sad... a very dramatic scene... well written poem... thanks for sharing

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 January 2009

so touching, thanks for sharing

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Sabrina Jubahar 06 January 2009

This is an emotional piece. Soo.. heart crunching and pure and honest. This is good, Luz!

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 January 2009

very emotional poem.... I loved it.

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Fay Slimm 06 January 2009

Luzaan - - this is a very strong subject to deal with and you have attempted it with courage, consideration and delicacy........ well written indeed,

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