Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 482,234 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Believe Me - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Believe me
Faith is totally free
No binding
Yet ever confiding

Building confidence
Providing chance
To improvise with time
Lead again sometimes

That is belief
Provides more relief
When you are in trouble
Takes you out from life's struggle

Never fight over religion
Those may be different in each regions
Almighty as it appears
Eveready to help and bear

No bad blood should be for piece of land
Not to create more foes than friends
Life is short and not in our hand
Start from one and try to mend

Enjoy every beat of second
You have nothing as reserve in fund
It may run out at any time
Pray to Him all the times

Not that I speak on somebody's behalf
It may be ordinary piece of advice for laugh
I have reached at the crucial phase
Yet I feel it nice at the end of an edge

Not all may want to hear
Still they may have one fear
How do they come round the corner?
They have to find it out later or sooner

Act fast before it is too late
There is nothing like luck or fate
You have to suffer and enjoy as well
Have it your self and beautifully tell

Comments about Believe Me by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/14/2012 3:30:00 AM)

    awesome composition (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 5:22:00 PM)

    Re: Believe me (Score: 1)
    by ladymaybebaby on Sunday, August 12,2012 (17: 28: 44)
    Hi, I wanted to point out a couple of things first. The rhyming was on again/off again. You need to stick to one thing and follow it all the way through, if not it's a huge distraction to the reader. Your message is delivered loud and clear, yet a wonder did the rhyming hold you back a bit? Maybe a narrative style would give you more freedom without having to concern your self with rhymes. You can just pour out your message with out any barriers. Just a thought. It is nice to read something enlightening for a change.

    -LMB xoxo
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 12:58:00 AM)

    Believe me
    Faith is totally free
    No binding
    Yet ever confiding
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012

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