Berry Of Blue Poem by Jonzo Bandwagoner

Berry Of Blue

Rating: 2.5


We talk together,
My smile, your eyes,
We eye our smiles,
My eyes on your eyes,
We laugh together-
-Life is confusing.

You're drinking blue,
I'm swallowing, we smirk,
You spit it out,
I'm gagging, we roar,
You're in my head-
-Life is awfully fun.

Saturday, October 7, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,together
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sophia White 10 October 2006

The first stanza is great, and so is the second, but it's cool how its makes you grow all turbulent - then 'life is fun'. Very surprising ending. Like it.

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Landrey 09 October 2006

especially the first stanza-strikingly poinient. I love it, keep up the brilliance! ! -landrey

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