Berto 2 Comments

loving someone is good, but tattooing the inside of the lips..........just too painful. your poem is nice it just need some editing. This is how i would do it Dazed and confused, I can not rise above the spell you put me under, for i fell in love. The masculines, the tenderness, the beauty i saw inside. You withdrew all those things, but there is one you can not hide. Through your eyes it flows, it doesn't seem to end it's the love you sent to my heart tenderly. To proof my love to you i did just this; I tattooed your name inside my lips. Every word that pass through them now i dedicate to you. This is my way of showing you, my love for you is real