Betrayal Of The Sunset Poem by Invalid Files

Betrayal Of The Sunset

Rating: 5.0


Sunset that betrayed me,
Hearing the city roar with life,
The artificial light
Illuminate the machines and poison

That pitch black mask,
It won't reflect anything,
It's inevitable,
It can't cry

Without a destination,
Wandering between streets,
Perhaps that how everything
was made to be

We live on,
It's painful,
It's difficult,
But those who survive,
Shine the brightest
Under this clouded sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 17 March 2012

A clear picture of New York City is drawn in this thought provoking and well crafted poem! I love it! Betrayal has hundred faces but PAIN is the unique word behind it! Powerful write and thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep it up! If time permits, please read my poem titled: Betrayal! Take care, Romeo_NYC

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Dave Walker 22 January 2012

Great poem, really like it. Great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Mental Hospital.

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