he loves me,
he loves me not,
he loves me.....
i'm torn apart,
by his lies,
by his eyes......
i am scared,
of his fists,
when he hits......
i am betrayed,
by his lies,
by his eyes,
by his fists,
when he hits.....
time wont stop him,
love wont either,
i think its time for me to leave,
time cheated me,
im out,
im lost,
i memorize,
his every move,
his face,
even the way he hit me,
i miss him,
but i am better off,
not,
betrayed.....
the best of betrayal...wid the mixture of anger n passion... lovely 1.
excellently written.......sad though............betrayal is such a pain...........easily understandable and heart felt............... amazing stuff.......cheers ;)
alicia...a really beautiful poem yes its bitter sweet and tangy...but great write cheers
Sweet yet bitter I love it...I know how u feel we always seem to want the things that hurts us most somtimes. Great poem, thanx DIMPLzZ
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow very passionate. i loved the way you started this one off. top to bttom a great piece.