Betrayed Poem by Alicia Roseberry

Betrayed



he loves me,
he loves me not,
he loves me.....

i'm torn apart,
by his lies,
by his eyes......

i am scared,
of his fists,
when he hits......

i am betrayed,
by his lies,
by his eyes,
by his fists,
when he hits.....

time wont stop him,
love wont either,
i think its time for me to leave,
time cheated me,

im out,
im lost,
i memorize,
his every move,
his face,
even the way he hit me,
i miss him,
but i am better off,
not,
betrayed.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 20 June 2009

wow very passionate. i loved the way you started this one off. top to bttom a great piece.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 19 June 2009

the best of betrayal...wid the mixture of anger n passion... lovely 1.

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Shekhar Joshi 19 June 2009

excellently written.......sad though............betrayal is such a pain...........easily understandable and heart felt............... amazing stuff.......cheers ;)

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Saadat Tahir 17 June 2009

alicia...a really beautiful poem yes its bitter sweet and tangy...but great write cheers

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Sweet yet bitter I love it...I know how u feel we always seem to want the things that hurts us most somtimes. Great poem, thanx DIMPLzZ

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