A Lonley Girls Wishes Poem by Alicia Roseberry

A Lonley Girls Wishes

Rating: 2.6


a lonley girl wishes for one thing,
and one thing only,
to end her life,
only one person can changer her mind,
her lover,
because a lonley girl wishes for,
someone who can love her without being told,
someone who is warm and not cold,
a lonley girl wishes to be treated like gold,
they want to be loved,
they want to be held,
a lonley girl wishes to be out of danger zones,
they want no more than to die or be loved,
i would know,
i am a lonley girl and these are my wishes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hiding Nothing 19 April 2009

I like this poem it theme is simaler to many of mine so therefore i can easily relate to it...10

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Raya Jondi 08 May 2009

i can see in the poem a grat massge and the moving fast in the tens

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Michael Nkwocha 12 May 2009

One who is truly lonely is one who deserts God. God loves perfectly, so we are not really lonely, we have many brothers and sisters. well penned.

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rago rago 16 June 2009

a clear perspective thought of write...... alicia just not only good a promosing poetes..........

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 January 2015

Alicia don't get desperate and act desperate. Please try to understand yourself and then the petals of life shall open to you one by one and you shall be able to appreciate its beauty. I am telling you all this treating you as a very young sister. Anyway I liked the poem for its poetic value and for that I heartily give you 10/10

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 January 2015

Alicia don't get desperate and act desperate. Please try to understand yourself and then the petals of life shall open to you one by one and you shall be able to appreciate its beauty. I am telling you all this treating you as a very young sister. Anyway I liked the poem for its poetic value and for that I heartily give you 10/10

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Miran Mohammed 28 July 2009

yeah, these r always my wishes.really nice, it touched my inside. :)

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Chelsey Allen 25 June 2009

i love this poem it mad me cry becuz before i met my fiancee this poem described me! i was so lonely and i just wanted to be loved for me! but now i have a fiancee and a little girl who means the world to me so if this poem is about you just no that it cant rain forever things will get better amazing poet!

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Pramod Kumar 16 June 2009

Really nice written, hope ur wishes come true.......

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