Better Poem by Neela Nath Das

Better

Rating: 5.0


Rather I'll stay
in my shell as
a hermit crab.
Secluded island
being smashed by
the tidal waves
of the full-foamed
tumultuous sea.
It's better
to brood over
the past calender
than to be in
topsy-turvy me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhishek Mishra 06 October 2013

Fantastically composed poem with great poetic imagination...

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 October 2013

This recoiling and silence is to be ended and we must tell the truth; pain or gain! I like the exposure in this poem

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Unwritten Soul 06 October 2013

WOW this imagery and choice of nature lesson is great! _Soul

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Shraddha The Poetess 06 October 2013

nice composition......................

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