Neela Nath Das


Walk With Me A While - Poem by Neela Nath Das

Walk with me for a while,
Throw your glum, and please, smile-
Our heaven is not very near.....
See there a grove of pine,
Standing calmly with green shine.
Hold my hand and take me there.
Are you angry? No, chuckle on your face,
I also want life and your tight embrace!
Two ways are there, which one to share?
Ah! the lonely, thready, still lane,
Inviting us, to shed our strain-
Let's walk thru the rain-soaked pine and fir....
For us now, divinity is in everything,
Whatever, exists here, and He does bring-
Nothing is extremely unfair.
So, flash with delight, and take stroll,
Celestial abode of love is our final goal!


Comments about Walk With Me A While by Neela Nath Das

  • Tom Allport (5/24/2017 9:05:00 AM)


    a lovely poem of togetherness through and thin? ...........well written (Report) Reply

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  • Rebecca Lyle (4/4/2017 4:56:00 PM)


    very lovely work, thanks ffor sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Loppo Louie (8/30/2016 11:55:00 AM)


    An excellent poem there... (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren (3/7/2016 6:38:00 PM)


    Very beautiful poem.. Thanks for sharing... I invite you read my poems.. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/21/2015 9:52:00 PM)


    Beautiful portrayal of the serene expanse of nature on way to the man's final destination is quite heart touching. Thanks for this amazing poem. I quote a few lines:
    Let's walk thru the rain-soaked pine and fir....
    For us now, divinity is in everything,
    Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/27/2015 5:57:00 AM)


    So, flash with delight, and take stroll,
    Celestial abode of love is our final goal! seeking divinity in everything. what a mature thinking. thank you.
    (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (8/18/2015 5:37:00 PM)


    A soothing poem with a beautiful title, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (8/18/2015 9:19:00 AM)


    Very nice. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!

    At first glance I thought the second line said
    Throw away your gum...
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (8/18/2015 7:22:00 AM)


    Divinity in the love of surrounding beauty simply makes one excited in a trance nice! (Report) Reply

  • (8/18/2015 1:25:00 AM)


    Divinity is in everything...in each line of this poem. A great work, Neela. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (8/12/2015 12:49:00 PM)


    Beautiful! Exquisite! Very romantic love poem elegantly penned with conviction. A well encapsulated piece with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Neela. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (5/4/2015 1:01:00 PM)


    Once again a Fantastic poem Neela. I liked the lines....

    so flash with delight, and take stroll,
    Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
    Loved reading each lines.
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr Library @ Debadarshi (3/5/2015 10:34:00 AM)


    Beautifully written.....For us now, divinity is in everything..... A must read for the lazy people....they ll walk, I am sure.... enjoyed reading this....thank you.... (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/20/2014 7:14:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem...... through the shady grove of pine, tread hand in hand through the untrodden path to the celestial abode of love! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 8:04:00 AM)


    beautiful thoughtful well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (7/24/2012 9:32:00 AM)


    Very well written. Loved reading it. 'Nothing is extremely unfair' such are life's workings. Reminded me of my poem 'A Point'. I invite you to read it. (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (7/14/2012 6:28:00 PM)


    Come back smile for the grimmest-jawed boring finding no interest in love man, written well though i have strong objection as regards the phrase - divinity is in everything-summoned love played well with the words (Report) Reply

  • Kamal N. Baruah (7/14/2012 9:33:00 AM)


    can't express in words how lovely this is......! ! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (7/14/2012 4:52:00 AM)


    Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
    excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Kasia Fedyk (7/13/2012 9:20:00 AM)


    Nila, just beautiful, it is so subtle and so much truth as we stand together and walk the path on a heavens cloud. Yes, so beautiful Divinity is in everything. Sublime poem Nila, I love it so much! Love, Kasia (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 14, 2012


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