No Star I Can See Poem by Neela Nath Das
No Star I Can See
There is no star,
Which I can see
From my window...
Boundless darkness
Is here in the
Chest of night.
The painted sky,
I saw in the daylight
Now is wiped away
As my last poem
I wrote but made
it vanish from
The page, because
It couldn't tell
The blank story,
Of my desolate
Life...no star
Still is visible
From this window..
Someone has spread
The melted pitch
On the road of my
Moped sky..I stare
And stare all night.
The caged breeze,
The starless sky
And night, none can share
My loneliness, I know
They are no living
Persons like me...
But, they can drown me
In complete void of
Sea of utter darkness.
One star can do this;
Only one star......
Thru my little window,
It's flickering light,
Can fill my dark room,
With its heavenly touch!
Well written! I like the hope/light at the end. Very nice. Thanks for recommending. Williams, T.
there is darkness in the beginning and light at the end, thats the job of an artist, to find a solution, lovely..liked it..loved it...: :)
Moped sky..I stare And stare all night. The caged breeze, The starless sky And night, none can share My loneliness....magnificent poetic expression. A wonderful poem.......top score.
In boundless darkness still I do not able to see stars around me through window. Still I hope to fill darkness with bright stars. Very interesting imagery is drawn definitely. Nice sharing.....10
That star was the light at the end of a dark day sadness with gladness great to read...regards
Great poem. One STAR that can actually do it is GOD. Hold on to His garment
Brilliant, touching, sad and mortal. A wonderful write. I hope you find your star!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Very impressive beauty in stars can express many things I see in stars as a new world a light that can guide our ways.