Saturday, April 5, 2008

Beyond The Mystic Deep Comments

Rating: 5.0

the crystal blue yet mystic deep
unbelievable! ! ! not by the dream
I do surrender by the wonder lost
even love when seems abstract
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Dr subhendu kar
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2008

A very piece of work from you; and, i am very glad to go through some of your poems. Bye. E.K.L.

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Rani Turton 12 April 2008

'truth still descends by despair'' 'waiting to despise the pain by dissolution', many memorable lines in this profoundly mystic poem. A wonderful piece of poetry.

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Abha Sharma 05 April 2008

the depth of this mystic verse takes you far off in solitude...almost in a subconscious state, where light, darkness, sun, moon all showering a total mystic affect, where love seems to be found and lost.... the profound expression, kind of spiritualistic idiom has made it interesting...the stanzas bind the single thought and has unity… interesting to read.

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rajagopal haran 05 April 2008

after a long time doctor...a mystic poem worth reading...great work

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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