Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,407 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Beyond The Mystic Deep - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

the crystal blue yet mystic deep
unbelievable! ! ! not by the dream
I do surrender by the wonder lost
even love when seems abstract

still the moment reasons to be true
who am I..you and me beyond and within
breath when bespoken of earthly rhythms
vision seems to rill by the defeat

love yet splendoured by the gleams
yet when befuddled and deep dark
dew when resourced from the deep night
still I am to understand me as I am

eye still breaths bright
the shadow when expires
the mirth when bedazzles by the story of the love
when eternal by the resonance true

yet I wonder by the faith when guiles
to know me within by the the blood be red or white
belief when bestirred yet redeems absolved
truth still descends by the despair

yet to know me who am I
when night is passing by deep dark
sun yet to rise by the light
waiting to despise the pain by dissolution


Comments about Beyond The Mystic Deep by Dr subhendu kar

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/18/2008 7:49:00 AM)


    A very piece of work from you; and, i am very glad to go through some of your poems.

    Bye.

    E.K.L.
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  • (4/12/2008 6:32:00 PM)


    'truth still descends by despair'' 'waiting to despise the pain by dissolution', many memorable lines in this profoundly mystic poem. A wonderful piece of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2008 12:30:00 PM)


    the depth of this mystic verse takes you far off in solitude...almost in a subconscious state, where light, darkness, sun, moon all showering a total mystic affect, where love seems to be found and lost....
    the profound expression, kind of spiritualistic idiom has made it interesting...the stanzas bind the single thought and has unity…
    interesting to read.
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  • rajagopal haran (4/5/2008 9:38:00 AM)


    after a long time doctor...a mystic poem worth reading...great work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 5, 2008



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