Big Error Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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You are putting shame on us
The world has put so much trust
On our ideology and preaching
You people are undoing holy work

When has religion preached about bloodbath?
Where anyone has suggested you such path?
Who has advocated killings of innocent?
Why such madness and illogical presentation of text?

We are brought down in the name of religion
We are condemned as terrorists in the region
Everybody looks our presence with suspicion
We are killed daily by our own and known

Why God may be willing such fate?
We pray and knell down to state
O God, spare us from this genocide
Take immediate steps to decide

We want to live
And survive
Along with others
To follow your orders

Courtesy: - picture by Olfa Philo

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Saturday, December 5, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2015

We want to live And survive Along with others To follow your orders

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M Asim Nehal 06 December 2015

We need to condemn terrorism at all level and try to find a permanent solution to this problem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2015

WELCOME Eustacia Sinjini, Olfa Philo Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2015

welcome Kanusing Solanki likes this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 24 minutes a

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2015

very well written 9 minutes ago by music heart loving life to Big error

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2015

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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