Biglive, Smallsuicide, Biglaugh, Smallsuicide, Bigbiglove Poem by Michelle Dickson

Biglive, Smallsuicide, Biglaugh, Smallsuicide, Bigbiglove

Rating: 4.0


Suicide....Suicide....Suicide
This is what my thoughts are
Suicide....Suicide....Suicide
I do not have a star
To put in all my hopes
To put in all my dreams
Where will I be without my star.

Before you came
Suicide....Suicide....Suicide
These were my thoughts
But now I am lost.
I do not have these thoughts anymore.
Live....Love....Laugh
That is whats running through my mind.

Live....Love....Laugh
I must be insane
Running off cocaine.

Live....Love....Laugh
These thoughts are brought to mind.
Live....Love....Laugh
It must be some kind of sign.

To be here with you
And the love that you sew.
I quit the drugs
But brought on the pain.
But it is bearable
As long as I have you to gain.

Suicide....Suicide....Suicide
Nope, dont need these thoughts no more.
Live....Love....Laugh
Now I have something to live for.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reece Dizon 12 December 2007

Nicley Written. Angel of Death, Cry At My Side.

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Suicide King 26 December 2007

Nice title, interesting poem.

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Bethany M. 31 January 2008

interesting point of view..... I really liked it keep writing!

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fallen beauty 26 June 2007

This is really cool. It makes so much sense. I like it a lot.

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Emma Rogers 23 September 2009

LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 OF DA BEST POEMZ IV READ! ! ! ! ! ! ! REALY TOUCHED DA HEART AND WAZ REALI MEANINGFUL :)

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H Bharj 25 February 2009

cool poem...someting worthliving 4...lfe and love... ;)

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Joshua Burckhard 03 June 2008

it's a nice lil poem and yeah only if it turned out more like this with people but ya never know i'm glad it worked for you though

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Tiffany Reeves 04 April 2008

i really love this poem.... it is very encouraging and helpful for those who think about suicide

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Emo Seb 20 February 2008

hey, this is awesome...i like how it's gotta different point of view, going from suicidal to happy, rather than suicidal to dead...refreshing...can't wait to read more! O, just a random thing, how crazy is that, your poem says 'LIVE LOVE LAUGH', so does my shirt...just thought i'd share that! -Seb

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Michelle Dickson

Michelle Dickson

Denison, Texas
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