Biggest Problem Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Biggest Problem

Rating: 5.0


Nothing is useless or waste
Only we refuse the real test
Otherwise no natural bodies fail
Carry their duty up to last and avail

Heart loves and chants too
Melody plays part and pleases through
What do we really miss in need?
Carelessness and misdeeds

Words supplement the needs
Finish it with honest deeds
Make no room for slight miss
Else it may give you deeper tease

We are biggest problem on earth
Do nothing useful except leaving body after death
Don't we think it is burden on lovely land?
When we do nothing except hatred to send

We think almighty is only for us
Any time we may ask to pardon for mistrust
He will gladly do it and give another chance
But after work we may not remember even at once

We need to change little
Have fine thoughts in mind and settle
Certainly some grace may be showered
With Less hurdles some nice chances may be offered

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 26 August 2012

We need to change little Have fine thoughts in mind and settle - love your lovely idea 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Daryl Walker26 minutes ago nicely written Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Barbara Cadogan22 minutes ago Nice reading.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Nothing is useless or waste Only we refuse the real test

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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