Bitter Goodbyes Poem by Carolyn Brunelle

Bitter Goodbyes

Rating: 4.3


There’s never enough time
To overcome the shadow
Of what has become inevitable.
Veiled within this loving heart;

Hidden in its acceptance,
Lies the hope that someday
My lover’s kiss will be mine
To Hold.

Now, in these bitter partings;
Concealed in sweet embraces,
I feel like the goodbye girl wondering
If I will ever be his homecoming queen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 10 May 2008

I find this one hard to relate to, but that's just fate. The title is interesting and speaks of much more here than is described. GW62

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Delwen Doyle 06 May 2008

Carolyn - I love your style & voice. Excellent poem!

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