Bitter Smile Poem by Jane Z

Bitter Smile



There's that bitter smile,
percieving onlookers,
A full heart
continuingly gives
cold shoulderly returned.
Still there's a flame
to survive,
to love,
to hate.
Flickerings dimmer...
day by day
like that bitter smile
a prematured flower bud rots.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
saltedpeanut blank 08 September 2009

aww you are much better than me >.> I really love 'premature flower bud rots' Nice job Trixy way to top meh: P

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Jane Z

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