Black Box Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Black Box

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BLACK box spinning, toiling in your
head, struggle, focuse, before the
fat king forfeits your bed.
HOARD your laughter, give the pay
off to a saint, learn to vision, like
a artist lost at sea, .
BLACK box spinning, toiling in your
head.........

Friday, June 30, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 30 June 2006

thank god its black not blank...coz you can work on the black to add colour...but a blank on...you got nothing to work on...deep thought...great read...nalini

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Mary Nagy 30 June 2006

Why is it that sometimes your poems are so interesting they almost seem dizzying? Such a feeling of being out of control with this one. Great work David. Sincerely, Mary

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David.....The Abstracts that unfold in your work are of a muse to follow...The process of unfolding them, however, may be an impossibility as only you are in your own dreams...but the outcome, as you consistently exhibit, is most unique & inquiring...'''''''''''''''''''''''''frank

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