Black Dawn Poem by A Dark Lifetime ...

Black Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Eyes in the night watching her
Everything is unstable, what a blur
Cold breaths and hidden cries
Black dawn with immortal eyes

A prince of darkness, the mighty night
Watched by solders and shining knights
In a kingdom he rules in fear
And she is getting near

Midnight sun was now close
She felt the fear till her bones
She got closer and didnt give in
Though life saw it as a sin

She sees a star and she sees a man
The prince saw her and ran
They kissed even if it was unknown
Better with beautiful strangers than all alone

She was chosen by his voice
She was his only full blooded choice
Everything else was still in night
Where he still ruled in fright

The light shines brightest in the dark
Together they left a red, thorny mark
No one accepted these lovers two
A midnight sun, a black dawn
Hated, feared for a love so true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 05 December 2012

very nice poem...great work..and labour..

0 0 Reply
Nader Baheri 02 December 2012

awesome pal.fabulous... first i wanna say what a nice contradiction of the topic.BLACK DAWN..wow... actually i enjoyed alot of the dark theme and the dark style of this piece of art.if we leave the prince and princess alone and accept them as lovers, the contradiction between dark and bright is really somehting.actually the rhyme and the meaning are superb too. welldone...and i voted 10++++ cheers~nb

0 0 Reply
Nader Baheri 02 December 2012

awesome pal.fabulous... first i wanna say what a nice contradiction of the topic.BLACK DAWN..wow... actually i enjoyed alot of the dark theme and the dark style of this piece of art.if we leave the prince and princess alone and accept them as lovers, the contradiction between dark and bright is really somehting.actually the rhyme and the meaning are superb too. welldone pal...and i voted 10++++ cheers~nb

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success