Black-Eyed Susan

Rating: 4.8

Call me Rudbeckia
(Becky for short)
A black-eyed susan at night
Petals luminous
Center inscrutable in the darkness

Part of a mass effect
Individually unique
Embraced in a golden sea
Spider-threads
Carry vibrations of those distant

Fractel-like,
Petals branch out
A lattice wrought for souls.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter A. Crowther 16 December 2005

Original and conjures up a dreamlike picture of a mass of flowers glowing in the dark.

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Charles Chaim Wax 13 December 2005

what a well written poem the words sparkle and delight soars keep up the good work

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