Black Hole - Pupil Poem by Daniel Peter Jones

Black Hole - Pupil

Rating: 5.0


Like a black hole, drinking in its surroundings,
No hesitation or fading hunger,
Endless streams of light swirling to its end
Absorbed in absolute darkness,
Each Planet a speck of dust, spiralling around a warped pupil.

Like a black hole; your pupil soaks in light
A perfect circular vitreous ball, Black encased in white,

Your Iris is the Galaxy lens, its colour and its form
Your optic nerve the wormhole, sending light to be transformed

Pulsing through an unknown world, after the horizon of events
The black hole soaks up gravity, like your pupil, light it bends

We process waves of light in ways; a black hole feeds its realm
We see images sometimes false, but in space that all depends

What's behind those dark holes, our brain can tell us our place
From our black hole, our pupil, to the pupil out in Space

Friday, March 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: space,science
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Priya 08 April 2017

A novel idea - comparing pupil to black whole! ! ! beautifully written deftly conjuring images.Thanks for sharing....a heartfelt 10☺

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Daniel Jones 08 April 2017

Thanks for your encouraging comment payal, means everything to me, ive had this idea for many years and I know I can expand on this, thanks for reading and your heartfelt comment :)

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Buried Alive 24 March 2017

Very elaborate comparison. Sounds like you are a biologist/astronomer turned poet skillful and thought provoking, not easy to accomplish

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

I thank you for your incredibly kind words, Im new to poetry so your comment really touched me, never been a scientist/biologist its just always fascinated me.

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John Ahern 24 March 2017

We see images sometimes false, that is for sure.

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

John thank for reading and taking time to coment.

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