Blank Poem by Genevieve Surrender

Blank

Rating: 3.5


This is when
my mind goes blank
and all I can do
is write about
what I can't do.

I have a problem.
I feel like an infant
playing with writer's-blocks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Henrie 09 February 2008

don't mean to make this a habit, but i was thinking one more line at the end: 'Today, all I can spell is you.'

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Kelly Allen Vinal 07 September 2005

Wonderful use of words amd a clever play on 'blocks'!

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Peter A. Crowther 06 September 2005

Nice imagery and a neat solution to a problem everyone experiences at one time or another

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