Blank Verse #1 Poem by Genevieve Surrender

Blank Verse #1

Rating: 2.8


Your eyes are the colour of water
but it is completely frozen over
and there is no way into your vision
unless I somehow warm you up first
Alas, that is something I can't do
unless you're willing to let yourself go
and press your body against my body
in hopes that the sparks will make a fire
So until our bones lie in the ground
I will have a fire inside of me
and it is burning like Andromeda
just because you aren't here for me
but I wonder, if you come around
will I want to burn for you much more?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sejal Pachisia 06 September 2006

haha.. well if this is based on reality, i guess there's only one way for you to find out..

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Joy Vanderhelm 13 November 2005

Such sultry sesuality. Wonderful writing. Keep it up!

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Vidushi Khera 10 October 2005

it's beautiful.....please read Fire In Ice from my collection....kinda fits into the poem! ! LuV VidZ

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Kelly Allen Vinal 02 September 2005

Very nicely done - sensual - keep writing!

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