Sages and broomsticks
motherless pearls
Witches that threaten
fatherless girls
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Deep and intriguing. Flows easily and rhythmically, but demands contemplation. Well-written, good poet.
As someone who just left the Mormon religion and all religions in general I appreciate your recognition of the use of threats as a means of control. It is a new world outside of the dogma and guilt and I find that my life really did begin again. Awesome poem!