Amy Marie

Bliss

Bliss is the one on a swing
Who feels her years breeze by.
She creates the sound of a bell
And doesn't even try.

She tastes a sunrise inside of her
Which looks like stars that went
To bow down to her gracefully
And give off an autumn scent.

Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

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  • Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad (1/11/2020 12:46:00 AM)

    Wow! This is great? ? love how this feels as I read! :)

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  • Linnie (1/24/2018 3:42:00 PM)

    i love this for linnei and enjoy it lv you

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/29/2017 1:43:00 PM)

    Bliss compared to the sunrise inside.......... very nice imagination.. very nice poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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  • Lynn Glover (1/20/2011 9:46:00 PM)

    Very beautifully written, Any, as you seem to have the ability to draw the reader right into the poem. I could feel the breeze and hear the bell as I drifted through the peom. Great Job.

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  • Lindbergh HughesLindbergh Hughes (12/2/2010 5:55:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem! ! ! The second verse was beautifully written into a poetic language: 'She tastes a sunrise inside of her Which looks like stars that went To bow down to her gracefully And give off an autumn scent. ' 'Bliss as an autumn scent', I'll keep it on my mind. +10

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  • Apothecary Montague (2/21/2010 6:20:00 PM)

    wow, absolutely love this.

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  • Mar Cav (2/17/2010 6:18:00 AM)

    What a sweet poem! Put a smile on my face!

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (2/7/2010 11:18:00 AM)

    Bursting with beauty my friend.10/10

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