Amy Marie

Rookie - 489 Points (July 13,1992 / United States)

Bliss - Poem by Amy Marie

Bliss is the one on a swing
Who feels her years breeze by.
She creates the sound of a bell
And doesn't even try.

She tastes a sunrise inside of her
Which looks like stars that went
To bow down to her gracefully
And give off an autumn scent.


Comments about Bliss by Amy Marie

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/29/2017 1:43:00 PM)


    Bliss compared to the sunrise inside.......... very nice imagination.. very nice poem. thank you dear poetess. tony (Report) Reply

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  • (4/1/2011 2:24:00 PM)


    simply put but so beautiful! good write (Report) Reply

  • (1/20/2011 9:46:00 PM)


    Very beautifully written, Any, as you seem to have the ability to draw the reader right into the poem. I could feel the breeze and hear the bell as I drifted through the peom. Great Job. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2010 5:55:00 PM)


    A wonderful poem! ! ! The second verse was beautifully written into a poetic language: 'She tastes a sunrise inside of her Which looks like stars that went To bow down to her gracefully And give off an autumn scent. ' 'Bliss as an autumn scent', I'll keep it on my mind. +10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/21/2010 6:20:00 PM)


    wow, absolutely love this. (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2010 6:18:00 AM)


    What a sweet poem! Put a smile on my face! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/7/2010 11:18:00 AM)


    Bursting with beauty my friend.10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010



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