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Blood

Rating: 5.0

Blood is still oozing out from the deep slit…
A sheaved hand,
Few gapping mouth,
There was a blast here…
A duty-bound reporter mutters
Live on the camera…
Blood is pouring out…
The lines have their place
In each and every copy-
-Of Julius Caesar…

A wife has seen the nightmare…
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Sanjib Das 25 September 2009

YOU HAVE WOVEN A REAL PICTURE, IN YOUR POEM IT'S FULL OF TEXTURE. YOU, IN YOUR POEM, SPOT THE BLOOD, WITH BLOOD, TERRORISTS CREATE FLOOD. OUR LIFE IS STAINED WITH TURMOIL, WE SHOULD MAKE THE TERRORIST'S ATTEMPT FOIL. LIFE BECOMES IMMORTAL HONOURABLY, WE REMRMBER OUR SOLDIER POSTHUMOUSLY. YOUR POEM SHOWS A KIND OF DIGNITY, I PRAISE YOUR QUALITY.

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Sanjib Das 25 September 2009

YOU HAVE WOVEN A REAL PICTURE, IN YOUR POEM IT'S FULL OF TEXTURE. YOU, IN YOUR POEM, SPOT THE BLOOD, WITH BLOOD, TERRORISTS CREATE FLOOD. OUR LIFE IS STAINED WITH TURMOIL, WE SHOULD MAKE THE TERRORIST'S ATTEMPT FOIL. LIFE BECOMES IMMORTAL HONOURABLY, WE REMRMBER OUR SOLDIER POSTHUMOUSLY. YOUR POEM SHOWS A KIND OF DIGNITY, I PRAISE YOUR QUALITY.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 October 2008

A horrible pircture painted in this poem well.

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