Blood Red Poem by Jess Terry

Blood Red

Rating: 4.5


i swim in the blood red waves,
not noticing the monster deep within,
i float on the blood red waves,
while the monster comes closer,
I'm sinking in the blood red waves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyrone Wingfield 07 October 2008

It didnt come off as suicide at all, seemed to me that you was planning a mass murder to be honest

1 0 Reply
Emily Henson 11 June 2008

i know it's not about suicide, but i can also understand how it would seem like that again, exceptional

1 0 Reply
Paul Buttigieg 12 April 2008

I thought it was about a shark attack on a beach

1 0 Reply
Jessica Rose 26 November 2006

hey i no im not sposed 2 write comments on my own poems but i dont fell like messengerin evry1 bout this poem. Its NOT ABOUT SUICIDE its about heart attacks (sort of) and how they can spring up on u quite suddenly. SO PLZ NO MORE COMMENTS ON SUICIDE! ! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success