Blood Red Poem by Jess Terry

Blood Red

Rating: 4.5


i swim in the blood red waves,
not noticing the monster deep within,
i float on the blood red waves,
while the monster comes closer,
I'm sinking in the blood red waves

Saturday, November 25, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: red
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyrone Wingfield 07 October 2008

It didnt come off as suicide at all, seemed to me that you was planning a mass murder to be honest

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Emily Henson 11 June 2008

i know it's not about suicide, but i can also understand how it would seem like that again, exceptional

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Paul Buttigieg 12 April 2008

I thought it was about a shark attack on a beach

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Jessica Rose 26 November 2006

hey i no im not sposed 2 write comments on my own poems but i dont fell like messengerin evry1 bout this poem. Its NOT ABOUT SUICIDE its about heart attacks (sort of) and how they can spring up on u quite suddenly. SO PLZ NO MORE COMMENTS ON SUICIDE! ! ! ! ! !

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