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Blue

Rating: 4.5
Blue floats and hovers
it never comes to rest
its scent is distant bonfires
its touch moth-breath

Blue is man-child
with spiritual eyes
a stranger in a room
who isn't one
soft down on upper lip
felt without touch
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Leslie Philibert 19 January 2015
Good write, well put together
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 January 2015
nice poem - the Blue the azure - it is the certain uncertainty lovely thanks
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Jasbir Chatterjee 19 January 2015
nice poem...I like the way it starts...Blue floats and hovers/it never comes to rest (meaning blue of sky and ocean, which is constantly moving and never at rest) ...
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Frank Avon 19 January 2015
Better than either of the two classic poems selected for this day. KAPOW!
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Exceptional metaphoric play throughout, young lady, indeed a well crafted and polished composition... ~FjR~
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Exceptional metaphoric play throughout, young lady, indeed a well crafted and polished composition... ~FjR~
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Exceptional metaphoric play throughout, young lady, indeed a well crafted and polished composition... ~FjR~
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Dawn Fuzan 13 May 2014
Philippa Amazing poetic style here, well done
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Drew Engman 21 March 2014
I love the feeling and sense/sensory impression this poem gives me of vision, or daytime certainties, fading into a dreamlike shadowy lack of clear sight about what our less than 20/20 night vision obscures, yet also opens up for us to our other sensory ways of taking in and thinking about impressions we tend to see more clearly without broad daylight, in transition as the night arrives. That was my first feeling,
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 19 January 2014
Vivid great imagery and smooth flow, words and lines portray a wonderful poetic portrait.
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